SonicFoxStrk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Falcon Punch!]

Squeeky

pretty good but try not to use to high of a voice
but besides that pretty orginal try voice changing your voice, singing it lower or asking someone else to sing it for you ^^

highwatermark responds:

I didn't sing this, it was off some guy who wrote the original lyrics. It's called "Falconmon".

[Exile Preliminary 2]

Much better

the storyline wasn't as exciting as in the first one but this one i liked cause it added a lot more characters and developed the plot a little bit, also your animation got a lot soomther and much more detail
some things to watch out for though, work on your hands/arms they are very impotant in these kind of movies since they appear a lot, also work on how they move the part when they were eating their hand movement were awkard and rays arms (the dude in the green) moved out of proportion with the rest of the arm. Besides that just work on proportional features of their body parts (not to short or long ) also what happened in between the first one and this one? how did luke go from on the farm to this acdamy(whats its name?) and what happen to the dude with the samus helmet? i was just kinda confused.... maybe i'm the only one that didn't get it...
besides the few problems with the hands/arms the flash was really great and i'm looking forward to the next part!! but remember you don't have to take my review seriously, i know how hard flash can be so i havent the reason to critize, but i just wanted to point some stuff out
see ya and hope to see you on brawl sometime send me a post on the wii if u ever want to fight!! and yes i know... i talk alot don't i?bye :P

RiverJordan responds:

So at the end of episode 1, The"samus helmet" guy pulls off his helmet and says "im ray grendle" so that covers the "who is ray" question. Also, luke says while talking to one of the royal guard veterans (old guy) train me, and then old guy says "ok!" heh, so that explains how he got to be in the royal guards... that was the reason for the first one.. haha, but yeah, i noticed i CANT draw hands... its fine that you ridicule me, i know its horrible lmao!
And don't think that he lives on a farm.... this isn't starwars...
thanks for your input

[Death Note Char Intro]

Death Note always good

not much death note stuff on here and this a pretty good submission, good artwork to and the facts are pretty accurate i'm working on a death note flash and i kinda need some help see that you can definently draw very good with flash it would be fun to work with you since i suck at using flash ^^;
hope to hear from you in the future

Bohman responds:

I don't mind helping you at all, as long it's minor tasks, since I'm a very busy guy :)
Got msn or anything? In that case, feel free to add me: [e-mail]

THanks for the review!

[The Drunken Spartan]

WOW great lip sync

not only was that one of the funniest uses of Leonidas i have ever seen plus the lip sync was perfect!!! not only that but it ran smoothy and was really clear, great job and keep it up! ^^ a diffinent fav for me XD

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:)

'Tis an honor to be fav'd.

[Why are you doing this?]

ha ha ha told you knives kill people!!

not like guns!! guns save people.. -bang-

hahaha that was really funny for a practice animation ^^
you should make more stuff with these characters!!
-SonicFoxStrk

kojay responds:

wish i could but their agents are demanding more money so screw them

[link gets teh stolen!!!!!]

Your not funny at all

Timon didn't do anything wrong his series is good and you don't need to make fun of him so lay off
so stop making these rip offs of his series and quit making fun of him!!

Negina responds:

asl babe kiss kiss :-*

[Operation Armageddon Tsr]

Awesome!! Wonder about the series...

little short but i understand it was a teaser
but mainly try to speed up the fight scenes a little bit and make the sound effects a little longer, also if your going to add voices your gonna need eyes and mouths for your characters so work on that
Overall it was a great movie, the music fit well and the fighting was ok, like i said needs to be increased in speed a bit... also try and avoid straight away shots, in a line, like at the end where he was running toward the boss head on the its hard to animate the other enemies popping up. If you want to show a scene like this show the entire path the character will be running on from far away( like the boss' view of of the fight and how it's coming toward him) and show all the enemies in proportion with the path, know what i mean?
anyway i can't wait for the real thing!!! i'll be sending you a demo reel soon with my voice for several characters and what not
keeping in touch to reach me just pm me when ever I'm always on and if not i will answer it As soon as i can, thanx!!
-SonicFoxStrk

RockLou responds:

I understand what you mean with speeding up of the movie, but not the comment about longer sound effects. What do you mean with that?
And what exactly do you mean with 'straight away shots'? Are you saying it looks bad when the 'camera view' kinda follows him, in that end scene?
Well... thanks, and i'll be looking forward to hear from you.

[Come down samurai]

Go Samurai Go!!

Wow this is really good for a first post, did you make this just for the heck of it or did you plan on elaborating it into a story or something, it doesn't matter to me i just kinda like to know ^^
anyway it's really well draw and even though it is all silhouettes it's still very cool and good animation, just how i like it short simple and to the point!!!
-SonicFoxStrk

gerar300 responds:

It was just a work for class, thanks for the comment :D

[Imp halloween part 2]

Yay!!!

The boobs they're back!! i thought they would never return!!

anyway it was great and pretty funny only two problems, the dragon kinda changed colors and design and the flash was a little short... though i understand with the Evil Doc you've been working on but still... also some of it didn't really make sense, like the bird saluting and the house exploding/sinking into the ground
overall it still made me laugh!!!
-SonicFoxStrk!!!
p.s. still... THE BOOBS!!!!

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Yeah, the dragon completely changed design in part 2.. that's why i should never do any work between one movie O_o;

Well the house sinking in the floor is what I call the "death villains exploding house" policy.
You know when a hero kills the villain, the villains dark castle or whatever immediatly starts cllapsing?
Well same here, except Djosh dind't have a dark castle but a normal suburbs house.